Movin' On Up, Version Deux


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Movin' On Up

by Jared Christensen

6 Responses

  1. Jared Christensen Jared Christensen

    The boss man wanted to see a more pronounced version, so I adapted it all to a green background.

    over 3 years ago

  2. Davy Kestens Davy Kestens

    would be cool if the emblem would have a little different hue or if it were a bit brighter.
    Or maybe keep the background green but keep the emblem gray?
    It's just that it's a great piece of art, but could use some more contrast from its background?

    over 3 years ago

  3. Chad Hietala Chad Hietala

    Really big fan of the subtle horizontal lines on the banner and seal.

    over 3 years ago

  4. Dalton Dalton

    Like the others said, but I also don't think the gloss on the emblem really matches what you're going for. The empty 1px stroke around the green box also takes away from the depth.

    Obviously the boss has the final word, but I like the initial version better. :)

    over 3 years ago

  5. Ryan Heath Ryan Heath

    It looks great, but I like the initial version better. The only thing about the initial version that I was on the fence about was the horizontal line that reached all the way to the content on the left - without that, I think the first one is perfect. (but that line may justify itself in a full screen view)

    over 3 years ago

  6. Aaron Martin Aaron Martin

    Count my vote as liking this version better.

    over 3 years ago

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