Holy Spirit

13 Responses

  1. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Rargh the 'S' is pissing me off! Can't seem to get it right.

    about 1 year ago

  2. Kishan Patel Kishan Patel

    So good, love the weight,i think the s looks great.

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    @Kishan Patel - Really? It just doesn't quite sit right with me... but it might just be me looking at it too long. Thanks so much! P.S. love your work.

    about 1 year ago

  4. Nick Winters Nick Winters

    Digging this. Don't think the S needs the little curly whip at the end though. Just keep it simple. Very nice!

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    about 1 year ago

  5. Anton Warkentin Anton Warkentin

    Super digging this Dave... Maybe flip the tail on the S like this?
    http://imgur.com/nEPBSoE

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    about 1 year ago

  6. Rowan Hamilton Rowan Hamilton

    i'd just smooth the curve on that little loop down the bottom and the inside curve at the top of the S.

    about 1 year ago

  7. Derrick Kempf Derrick Kempf

    This is beautiful, but I agree with you! I think it has to do with the weight of the spine. If you just beef up the spine of the S a little it will carry more weight in that area and draw less attention to it. It's just a little lighter than the p, as well as the h, l, r, t, which I think makes it seem off. P.S. my favorite letters are the t and the r. So rad!

    about 1 year ago

  8. Danielle Evans Danielle Evans

    Does the 'S' absolutely need the loop? If so, maybe use the loop embellishment under 'Spirit' as a guide. I think the shape would be more pleasing and harmonious. Good luck- it's quite beautiful thus far!

    about 1 year ago

  9. Amber Asay Amber Asay

    If it helps any, I like the bottom left from the sketches. The closed loop seems more subtle and cohesive with the words. Beautiful work!

    about 1 year ago

  10. Michael Meek Michael Meek

    Simply Beautiful, but can't wait to see the rebound. Great Job!

    about 1 year ago

  11. Tyler Anthony Tyler Anthony

    Like it brotha.

    about 1 year ago

  12. Greg Thomas Greg Thomas

    Looks good, but I agree the "S" feels a bit out of place. It's almost there, though. Maybe mimicking the shape of the cross bar on the "t" but a hook instead of a loop, like some of your other sketches. Good stuff, @Dave Coleman.

    about 1 year ago

  13. Fixed up the 'S', much happier with it now. Also tweaked the rest. Any more suggestions before it goes to the client?

    Thanks @Nick Winters, @Anton Warkentin, @Rowan Hamilton, @Derrick Kempf, @Danielle Evans, @Amber Asay & @Greg Thomas for the helpful advice.

    Check out the nice big full colour finished design on my blog: http://dvclmn.tumblr.com

    about 1 year ago

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