13 Responses

  1. Andrew Power Andrew Power

    My teacher hates this. I need serious critique.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pascal Adriaansen Pascal Adriaansen

    Your teacher is crazy, it looks nice. But what's this for? It looks cool and I like the lighting treatment on the 3. The blue fills (water?) on "ring" are nice as well but the whole piece doesn't really make sense to me...

    over 1 year ago

  3. André Visockis André Visockis

    what's his point to hate it? envy?

    over 1 year ago

  4. Andrew Power Andrew Power

    It's for a circus themed chocolate bar which will make a lot more sense when you see it on the final package.

    She said the ornamental blue parts I made look awkward, and should be across the bottom of all the letters, but couldn't offer any real suggestion to fix it. Made a weird remark about the "significance" of the decorative lines I have on there as well...

    over 1 year ago

  5. Adam Grason Adam Grason

    To be completely honest she is just pissed she isnt this good. This is perfect! I immediately thought "Circus". Sorry I can't give you any feedback...you did too good haha.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Neil Tasker Neil Tasker

    I thought of circus right away, dont know what your teacher is talking about, I would however fill in all the bottoms with the blue, it is bothering me that they arent all like that

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    over 1 year ago

  7. Justin Burns Justin Burns

    I agree with Neil. It's really cool, but i don't get why it's not all blue on the bottom - sort of looks unfinished.

    Something like this maybe?

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    over 1 year ago

  8. Andrew Power Andrew Power

    Thanks guys, working on it!

    over 1 year ago

  9. Danny Prew Danny Prew

    What do teachers know?

    over 1 year ago

  10. Natalia Larina Natalia Larina

    Great work, I like it:)

    over 1 year ago

  11. Bill Bone Bill Bone

    While I love this (the lighting on the 3 is sublime and the circus connection is crstyal clear) I can see what your teacher means with regards to the blue ornaments, it doesn't really work on the R or the N. The Cast Iron font does similar you may want to check out: http://www.dafont.com/cast-iron.font

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    over 1 year ago

  12. Philippe Lefebvre Philippe Lefebvre

    I have to say i'm with your teacher on the blue ornaments. When you look at the logo from afar, it looks unfinished. I know it dosen't work with some of the letters, so I think it means you'll have to have the typo or something. But besides the blue bottoms, it's really nice!

    over 1 year ago

  13. Hey guys, is this looking better? Also added an option with a curve.

    over 1 year ago

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