Bim2

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  1. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    Sketch I did a while back. Trying my hand at a bit more 'masculine' and bold designs haha. Thought I would finish this up in time for our Independence day on Friday. I always seem to have a struggle with m's they never look right!

    Bim is an abbreviation Barbadians call our island Barbados

    over 1 year ago

  2. Chris Carey Chris Carey

    I'm liking the flow of the piece but I'm afraid at first glance I read it as "Bum" not "Bim" Perhaps if you separated the 'i' from the 'm' it would read more clearly.

    It's nice to see a bolder style of type from you. The B is really solid work. :)

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    @Chris Thank you! You aren't the only who read it as Bum haha. I definitely need to rework the space between the i and m like you suggested. :)

    over 1 year ago

  4. Florin Capota Florin Capota

    nice work on that B, a good solution should be to make the space between i and m a lot smaller

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    over 1 year ago

  5. Sean Glass Sean Glass

    Love the colors.

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    over 1 year ago

  6. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    @Florin Thank you and thanks for the suggestion, will try that! :)

    @Sean Glass Thank you! It's two of the colours from our flag

    over 1 year ago

  7. Gustavo Mancini Gustavo Mancini

    Perfect!

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    9 months ago

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