Pumped Up Kicks

Literal interpretation of the song, something I've been working on since I posted that shoe icon. I'm a big fan of FTP's work, and had this idea pop into my head. I'm not 100% satisfied with the text, and I want to have a hand coming in from the top about to push the pump down, but I thought I'd share it where it is. What do you think?

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deleted the other shot as the size of the pump was bothering me, I think this looks a little better.