Comic Book Cover

Here's a cover for a comic I recently completed. The cover, as well as the comic, are still a work in progress. I'd love any crits from you all on the design. The rest of the comic can be read here: http://matbarton.tumblr.com/post/60724047601/the-secret-life-of-steven-seagal-by-mat-barton-and

I'm going to add red to the fantasy sequences to help the reader out a little. I'm open to any other designs suggestions from all you fine folks. Thanks.