Holy Spirit - Fixed

21 Responses

1. Pro Dave Coleman

   Fixed up the 'S', much happier with it now. Also tweaked the rest. Any more suggestions before it goes to the client?

   Thanks @Nick Winters, @Anton Warkentin, @Rowan Hamilton, @Derrick Kempf, @Danielle Evans, @Amber Asay & @Greg Thomas for the helpful advice.

   Check out the nice big full colour finished design on my blog: http://dvclmn.tumblr.com

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   3 months ago

2. Tyler van der Hoeven

   *stares*

   (30 minutes later)

   Cool.

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   3 months ago

3. Rowan Hamilton

   nope. looks good mate.
   ps. i'm heading up to katoomba this arvo for men's convention :)

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   3 months ago

4. Pro Amber Asay

   Looks beautiful!

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   3 months ago

5. Derrick Kempf

   Well done indeed. I love how this turned out. After looking at this version it makes the S on the other version look like it was trying too hard. Great stuff.

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   3 months ago

6. Pro Dave Coleman

   Oh good, thanks so much guys :) - @Tyler van der Hoeven @Rowan Hamilton @Amber Asay @Derrick Kempf

   3 months ago

7. Joe Prince

   Really great flow here Dave. Love it.

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   3 months ago

8. Pro Dave Coleman

   Cheers Joe, means a lot bro. @Joe Prince

   3 months ago

9. Pro Anton Warkentin

   Awesome!

   3 months ago

10. Pro Hampton Creative

    Those small tweaks helped a lot. Looks great!

    3 months ago

11. Pro Philip Eggleston

    Fantastic weight and balance!

    3 months ago

12. Nick Winters

    PERFECT!

    3 months ago

13. Cory Staudacher

    Glory!

    3 months ago

14. Pro Eddie Lobanovskiy

    Beautiful work brother :)

    3 months ago

15. Pro Dave Coleman

    @Anton Warkentin - YOU are! Thanks mate :)
    @Hampton Creative - Ah I'm so glad, cheers!
    @Philip Eggleston - So good to hear man, thanks a bunch.
    @Nick Winters - Cheers Nick lad :) Your advice of 'keep it simple' was foremost in my head whilst working on this!
    @Cory Staudacher - Haha amen!
    @Eddie Lobanovskiy - Appreciate dude, right back at you!

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    3 months ago

16. Holy Spirit - Final This is the last shot for this one - here is the final placement for Holy Spirit. The attachments show the two slides supplied to church. I'm happy with the ...

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    Holy Spirit - Final

    by Dave Coleman

    This is the last shot for this one - here is the final placement for Holy Spirit. The attachments show the two slides supplied to church. I'm happy with the result, I feel I've learnt a lot about type in the process. SO much more to learn though, it's an exciting journey!

    Thanks so much for the incredibly helpful feedback. Simply couldn't make improvements without it.

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    3 months ago

17. Pro Inka Mathew

    Great logotype, Dave. So balanced on everything.

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    3 months ago

18. Pro Dave Coleman

    Thanks bro! @Inka Mathew

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    3 months ago

19. Pro Inka Mathew

    You're welcome! But I'm a sis ;-)

    3 months ago

20. Pro Dave Coleman

    Haha classic, sorry Inka :) @Inka Mathew

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    3 months ago

21. Pro Inka Mathew

    No prob, Dave :-)

    3 months ago