Fixed up the 'S', much happier with it now. Also tweaked the rest. Any more suggestions before it goes to the client?
Thanks @Nick Winters, @Anton Warkentin, @Rowan Hamilton, @Derrick Kempf, @Danielle Evans, @Amber Asay & @Greg Thomas for the helpful advice.
Check out the nice big full colour finished design on my blog: http://dvclmn.tumblr.com
about 1 year ago
(30 minutes later)
nope. looks good mate.
ps. i'm heading up to katoomba this arvo for men's convention :)
Well done indeed. I love how this turned out. After looking at this version it makes the S on the other version look like it was trying too hard. Great stuff.
Oh good, thanks so much guys :) - @Tyler van der Hoeven @Rowan Hamilton @Amber Asay @Derrick Kempf
Really great flow here Dave. Love it.
Cheers Joe, means a lot bro. @Joe Prince
Those small tweaks helped a lot. Looks great!
Fantastic weight and balance!
Beautiful work brother :)
@Anton Warkentin - YOU are! Thanks mate :)
@Hampton Creative - Ah I'm so glad, cheers!
@Philip Eggleston - So good to hear man, thanks a bunch.
@Nick Winters - Cheers Nick lad :) Your advice of 'keep it simple' was foremost in my head whilst working on this!
@Cory Staudacher - Haha amen!
@Eddie Lobanovskiy - Appreciate dude, right back at you!
by Dave Coleman
This is the last shot for this one - here is the final placement for Holy Spirit. The attachments show the two slides supplied to church. I'm happy with the result, I feel I've learnt a lot about type in the process. SO much more to learn though, it's an exciting journey!
Thanks so much for the incredibly helpful feedback. Simply couldn't make improvements without it.
about 1 year ago
Great logotype, Dave. So balanced on everything.
Thanks bro! @Inka Mathew
You're welcome! But I'm a sis ;-)
Haha classic, sorry Inka :) @Inka Mathew
No prob, Dave :-)
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