Fixed up the 'S', much happier with it now. Also tweaked the rest. Any more suggestions before it goes to the client?
Thanks @Nick Winters, @Anton Warkentin, @Rowan Hamilton, @Derrick Kempf, @Danielle Evans, @Amber Asay & @Greg Thomas for the helpful advice.
Check out the nice big full colour finished design on my blog: http://dvclmn.tumblr.com
3 months ago
(30 minutes later)
nope. looks good mate.
ps. i'm heading up to katoomba this arvo for men's convention :)
Well done indeed. I love how this turned out. After looking at this version it makes the S on the other version look like it was trying too hard. Great stuff.
Oh good, thanks so much guys :) - @Tyler van der Hoeven @Rowan Hamilton @Amber Asay @Derrick Kempf
Really great flow here Dave. Love it.
Cheers Joe, means a lot bro. @Joe Prince
Those small tweaks helped a lot. Looks great!
Fantastic weight and balance!
Beautiful work brother :)
@Anton Warkentin - YOU are! Thanks mate :)
@Hampton Creative - Ah I'm so glad, cheers!
@Philip Eggleston - So good to hear man, thanks a bunch.
@Nick Winters - Cheers Nick lad :) Your advice of 'keep it simple' was foremost in my head whilst working on this!
@Cory Staudacher - Haha amen!
@Eddie Lobanovskiy - Appreciate dude, right back at you!
by Dave Coleman
This is the last shot for this one - here is the final placement for Holy Spirit. The attachments show the two slides supplied to church. I'm happy with the result, I feel I've learnt a lot about type in the process. SO much more to learn though, it's an exciting journey!
Thanks so much for the incredibly helpful feedback. Simply couldn't make improvements without it.
3 months ago
Great logotype, Dave. So balanced on everything.
Thanks bro! @Inka Mathew
You're welcome! But I'm a sis ;-)
Haha classic, sorry Inka :) @Inka Mathew
No prob, Dave :-)
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