Still would love to hear feedback and if you have a favorite or if you have suggestions to make it better. I took out the floating bottle, there was no reason for it and was just a distraction.
10 months ago
I'm more convinced by the plain -right- version, without the bridge, but then "Passion Pit" seems to float, maybe you should integrate it into a the bridge, simplified, and make it less opaque (as the left' one).
I think you should remove the border beetween the title and water too, because of the waves which aren't enough rounded, so the jonction is too tough.
Good start by the way, I like this band too, are you their regular designer ?
I love Sören's idea of integrating the type into the bridge. Looking great already!
This is why I love Dribbble - Thanks for the ideas/feeback @Sören Gourraud-Naulin and @Matt Potter
Left one...or I like the idea of putting the type in the bridge.
I like the one with the bridge -- makes more of a connection with the location. I would look at the scale/shape of the waves, though. While I love the simplicity of them, they stand out a bit too much to me -- I don't know if it's the size, depth, or how sharp they are, but they don't seem to quite fit with the girl or the bridge. Play around with them, something will feel right to you!
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