Thanks so much dribbblers for your help getting me closer to the ideal mark. Branding oneself is so difficult. With several suggestions this piece has solved the issues of the e's, l's, and balanced with a large M.
My final concern is now with the b in bleue and subsequent swashes. I can't seem to get the right combination. Any thoughts are very appreciated!!
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