Finalizing

After several iterations for the landing page, I think I'm finally settling down on this one.

I wanted the introduction to be small, precise, but at the same time, be descriptive of what the app can do for you, or how you can use it for your benefit, etc.

To the right of the text will be an iPhone model with screen caps. I haven't figured out that bit yet, but it's coming along.

The attached story board image should give you a better idea of how the final bit will look.

Looking forward to hearing your criticism/comments/thoughts.