Holy Spirit - Fixed

21 Responses

  1. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Fixed up the 'S', much happier with it now. Also tweaked the rest. Any more suggestions before it goes to the client?

    Thanks @Nick Winters, @Anton Warkentin, @Rowan Hamilton, @Derrick Kempf, @Danielle Evans, @Amber Asay & @Greg Thomas for the helpful advice.

    Check out the nice big full colour finished design on my blog: http://dvclmn.tumblr.com

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    about 1 year ago

  2. Tyler van der Hoeven Tyler van der Hoeven

    *stares*

    (30 minutes later)

    Cool.

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Rowan Hamilton Rowan Hamilton

    nope. looks good mate.
    ps. i'm heading up to katoomba this arvo for men's convention :)

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    about 1 year ago

  4. Amber Asay Amber Asay

    Looks beautiful!

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    about 1 year ago

  5. Derrick Kempf Derrick Kempf

    Well done indeed. I love how this turned out. After looking at this version it makes the S on the other version look like it was trying too hard. Great stuff.

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    about 1 year ago

  6. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    about 1 year ago

  7. Joe Prince Joe Prince

    Really great flow here Dave. Love it.

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    about 1 year ago

  8. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Cheers Joe, means a lot bro. @Joe Prince

    about 1 year ago

  9. Anton Warkentin Anton Warkentin

    Awesome!

    about 1 year ago

  10. Hampton Creative Hampton Creative

    Those small tweaks helped a lot. Looks great!

    about 1 year ago

  11. Philip Eggleston Philip Eggleston

    Fantastic weight and balance!

    about 1 year ago

  12. Nick Winters Nick Winters

    PERFECT!

    about 1 year ago

  13. Cory Staudacher Cory Staudacher

    Glory!

    about 1 year ago

  14. Eddie Lobanovskiy Eddie Lobanovskiy

    Beautiful work brother :)

    about 1 year ago

  15. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    @Anton Warkentin - YOU are! Thanks mate :)
    @Hampton Creative - Ah I'm so glad, cheers!
    @Philip Eggleston - So good to hear man, thanks a bunch.
    @Nick Winters - Cheers Nick lad :) Your advice of 'keep it simple' was foremost in my head whilst working on this!
    @Cory Staudacher - Haha amen!
    @Eddie Lobanovskiy - Appreciate dude, right back at you!

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    about 1 year ago

  16. This is the last shot for this one - here is the final placement for Holy Spirit. The attachments show the two slides supplied to church. I'm happy with the result, I feel I've learnt a lot about type in the process. SO much more to learn though, it's an exciting journey!

    Thanks so much for the incredibly helpful feedback. Simply couldn't make improvements without it.

    about 1 year ago

  17. Inka Mathew Inka Mathew

    Great logotype, Dave. So balanced on everything.

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    about 1 year ago

  18. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Thanks bro! @Inka Mathew

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    about 1 year ago

  19. Inka Mathew Inka Mathew

    You're welcome! But I'm a sis ;-)

    about 1 year ago

  20. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Haha classic, sorry Inka :) @Inka Mathew

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    about 1 year ago

  21. Inka Mathew Inka Mathew

    No prob, Dave :-)

    about 1 year ago

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