Granola 2

13 Responses

  1. Jake Dugard Jake Dugard

    Another idea. Always welcome feedback.

    about 1 year ago

  2. Ryan Vancil Ryan Vancil

    This one definitely stays true to the tagline. It has a very handcrafted feel to it. Diggin it!

    about 1 year ago

  3. Yossi Belkin Yossi Belkin

    Love the vibe!

    about 1 year ago

  4. David M. Smith David M. Smith

    Looking good. I think the G has a little too much negative space that creates an awkward empty zone. Maybe bring the loop down some.

    about 1 year ago

  5. Mason Phillips Mason Phillips

    Very nice. I might give the 'n' a little more tweaking to differentiate it from the 'r'—at first glance, it looks sort of like "Grarola."

    about 1 year ago

  6. Jake Dugard Jake Dugard

    @David M. Smith @Mason Phillips Thanks for the feedback fellas. I'll work on those things.

    about 1 year ago

  7. Jay Roberts Jay Roberts

    Both of these directions are great man. I wouldn't change much here. Maybe the G could lean in a little more?

    about 1 year ago

  8. Zach Herring Zach Herring

    Feels like a travel postcard, so I kind of love it. Darken/flatten out the BG to give the letters a better read and I think you're close to golden.

    about 1 year ago

  9. Deuxtone Deuxtone

    I have a whole klan of family in Davis West Virginia, Who refer to all the Hikers on the AT as Damn Granola's

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    about 1 year ago

  10. Charles Patterson Charles Patterson

    @Jake Dugard dude this is really nice, I love the style!

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    about 1 year ago

  11. Dave Coleman Dave Coleman

    Oh I literally groaned a bit when I saw this. Seriously love what's going on here. Beautiful work!

    about 1 year ago

  12. Jake Dugard Jake Dugard

    @Mason Phillips Do you have any suggestions to make the "n" less "r"ish.

    about 1 year ago

  13. Mason Phillips Mason Phillips

    Hmm. Maybe round the shoulder of the 'n' a little more? You could also try dropping a line from the top of that 'a' connector down to the baseline so that the stem of the 'n' is more obvious. Hope that makes sense—dunno if I'm doing a great job of explaining this.

    about 1 year ago

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