Custom type logo I worked out over the weekend. Anyone see anything that is bothering them?
http://tinyurl.com/a6eawtm (ALTERNATE VERSION)
http://tinyurl.com/bfyfn2o (HIGH RES)
about 1 year ago
love that alternate version. The black border deal really takes away from the good typography in my opinion. I think its much stronger without it. killer work either way, man.
@Andrew Miller Thanks man, I agree 100% but the client really wants a border... maybe inverting the colors will draw more attention to the type?
yeah or maybe something more simplistic for the border? I feel like the points are diverting my eye from the type a little... who knows haha I'm definitely no art director!
If I had to pick something that bothers me, It would be the top terminal of the S. I was expecting it to be curved like the other stroke endings, but seeing how it reverses direction back into the flourish for the t's crossbar, it makes sense. Maybe perhaps angle it more so it's not so orthogonal? Anyway, great work!
@Kosal Sen Oh man that was bothering me as well but I was unsure of how to solve the problem. I'll definitely take your advice into consideration, much appreciated!
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