A Little Critique

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  1. Justin Schafer Justin Schafer

    Hey guys, looking for a good ole fashioned critique. See the attachment to compare the two options.

    1. Top or bottom?
    2. Thoughts on "Creative" vs "Design" or combining them both "Creative + Design"
    3. Knockout the line around the "F"?
    4. Any other thoughts?


    over 1 year ago

  2. Tamas Kojo Tamas Kojo

    great typo!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Parker Peterson Parker Peterson

    I like "Schafer Design" personally. Keep the line around the f, it defines the letterform so it doesn't get lost in your underline.

    Nice work.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Brandon Herbel Brandon Herbel

    Bottom version for sure!

    What about just having it Schafer and not using "Design" or "Creative"?

    I think the line as it is in the 2nd version is great. Knocking it out won't be a bad idea either. A strong logo regardless..

    My only other suggestion is maybe trying it inside of a circle? Could be cool to have that other option.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Ryan Bren Ryan Bren

    beautiful man. I like the bottom one but knock out the F. I say drop the 'creative' or 'design' and just rock 'Schafer' by itself.


    over 1 year ago

  6. Jeremy Teff Jeremy Teff

    Bottom for sure! Agreed with the others on knocking the "F" out of the line.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Joe Sparano Joe Sparano

    1. top — the mirrored curves on the bottom look to me like they're intentionally framing the "cha", and the straight line is a stronger baseline.

    2. "design" — design involves creativity anyway, and it sounds smarter.

    3. it's a toss-up.

    over 1 year ago

  8. Andrew Littmann Andrew Littmann

    I like the top one...definitely knockout the f, it looks a little off without that and I like the idea of just going with Schafer by itself...at least for logo purposes, I think that script is strong enough.

    over 1 year ago

  9. Derrick Kempf Derrick Kempf

    I like the top version for the swoosh, the knockout of the line under the "f" and the "creative".

    over 1 year ago

  10. Matt Welnack Matt Welnack

    I like the bottom type treatment, it feels a little tighter and more cohesive (the space around the S + c), but I would knock out the F. And Schafer Design rolls off the tongue nicer

    over 1 year ago

  11. Lee Woodbridge Lee Woodbridge

    I like the bottom one but prefer creative. I'm also with the others that It holds its own without the creative or design.
    Good job.

    over 1 year ago

  12. Harrison Connally Harrison Connally

    Great script type. I assume you made it yourself. hats off to you my friend.

    about 1 year ago

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