Ok, let's break in Dribbble for 2013 then. Hope you all enjoyed the holidays.
Here's a logo concept for Vault 9, a cloud-based service focused on the distribution, consumption and management of music.
Feedback is welcomed both by me and the client. Cheers in advance! We will review all the feedback together in a day or two (so if you want to screw me over, here's your chance, haha. juuuust kidding).
over 1 year ago
I like it. I think the 9 in the wordmark below might need a little work; the word itself is very strong and straight and the 9 looks soft.
I really like the mark. Sounds like a cool service too.
Really dig it man, especially the custom alteration to the A.
The shield is a bit line heavy (very celtic knot-like), In my opinion if you cleaned out some of the lines or connected the two 'trailing lines' on the top it would be cleaner. Word mark looks great, I agree with @Nicholas van der Meer the 9 needs a touch, maybe a bit of the "A" whisp
man, that A is killer.
Emir, this is great work - on track to be some of your best imho. I absolutely adore the mark! The "A" as mentioned is killer as well. I too believe the one piece that could be experimented a bit with is the "9" ...but nevertheless, this is looking great! Cheers!
Looks bold, Emir. For the 9, without looking at the title I had a bit of a hard time reading it as 9. I think if you omit the leg going up and just leave the leg going down, it will read as 9 better. Just my thought. Other than that, I think it's a solid logo. Makes you feel secure using their service.
love the detail on the "A"
Nice. Love seeing the triquetra-based grid.
This could be a visual illusion, but it seems like space between the end of the 9's stem and bowl is a pixel smaller than the other line spacing on the shield. I was going suggest the same thing @Inka Mathew said. Removing the 2nd half of the 9's stem would really make it stand out and be more readable at a glance.
Mmm totally my taste, and yellow!
Whether your client is listening or not, I can hands down say this is one of the best logos I have seen in the past 5 years. Not only is it bold, striking, and modern, but it is also memorable and intriguing.
Let me just say that if this isn't chosen I am changing my company name to something that starts with a V and ends with a 9 so I can have the logo. It's that good. Hat's off to you Emir.
it's perfect! Don't change a thing!
@Nicholas @Jared @Simon @Justin @Phi @Patrick @Inka @Avinash @Ben @Alex @Paris @Mikael @Nick @Daniel & @Matt - Thank you guys so so much for all the feedback, input and comments so far. As always, invaluable. Can't thank you enough.
And @Joe, are you trying to make me cry? That is the most flattering comment I have ever received, for sure. Thank you, man. It's so nice, that the client is now gonna think I made you type that, hahaha. Cheers man! Btw, I have something I need to talk to you about. Will hit you with an email about it very soon.
Like a Norwegian boss!
Very well done Emir!
That's fantastic Emir, awesome logo!!!
Can't be much constructive here cause I don't see how you can improve it, it's just perfect for me...Drooling stuf for sure =}
Have a Great one too, bro!!!!
oh snap shit just got real! sweet work :)
solid one Emir, nice seeing you using this style also!
@Mauricio @Luke @Helder @♜ Monsieur Didi ♜ @Florin & @jumjum - Thanks a mill, gentlemen!
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