Working on something for a new sermon series. Would really love some feedback on this. Does the thin type go with the bold heart? Thanks!
@Travis any thoughts?
over 1 year ago
I think the heart is overpowering the type. I also think it feels 'empty' right now. I don't think there is enough content visually to grab my attention. I would make the heart and the type visually equal so the type doesn't fall so far back.
@Travis yeah i agree with you...gonna take another pass at it. thanks! :)
Agreed. If this were reduced in size at all the text has the potential to become illegible. But I like where it's going. Nice work.
Thanks @Mike! Appreciate your feedback. :)
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