6 Responses

  1. Anton Peck Anton Peck

    Nice. Might I point out that the distressing on the lower-right curve of the "B" has a slight upward bend that doesn't seem to match with the edge under "BRADLEY"?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Matthew Smith Matthew Smith

    I might just need to make them more different. They shouldn't match, they should feel part of the same family.

    over 1 year ago

  3. Phil Coffman Phil Coffman

    I dig the concept. I would recommend slightly roughing up the edges of the letterforms to unite them more with the brushed effect as right now they look separate or disjointed.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Matthew Smith Matthew Smith

    @Phil Coffman thx man. After sitting with this for a day I think I agree. I have to play with the edges to give them a more cohesive feel.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Jonathan Bowden Jonathan Bowden

    I second phil's suggestion of roughing up the type a bit, to match the surrounding shape. Also, the type face choice seems a bit mundane. Maybe try something with a bit more character.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Matthew Smith Matthew Smith

    @Jonathan Bowden The character is in the external mark. Contrast is important for the internal name.

    over 1 year ago

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