Landing page

8 Responses

  1. Pawel Kadysz Pawel Kadysz

    Part of a landing page for a site I'm currently working on.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Kamal Chaneman Kamal Chaneman

    text a bit hard to read, perhaps adding text shadow would helpful?
    Otherwise it's looking good :)

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Kawsar Ali Kawsar Ali

    Yap, I adress about the text shadow

    over 1 year ago

  4. Igor Ivankovic Igor Ivankovic

    I like it the way it is :)

    over 1 year ago

  5. Joe Ellis Joe Ellis

    I like where it's going, but I'd consider some italic emphasis on either the "sell on your own" or "no credit card" text. I get the feeling it might draw attention to them a tad more. Just my opinion though!

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pawel Kadysz Pawel Kadysz

    @Joe Ellis or perhaps a hand-drawn underline? I'll think about it. Thanks.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Joe Ellis Joe Ellis

    @Pawel Kadysz Yes, possibly so! I think it was the difference in type on the ampersand brought the idea to mind.

    Anyways, look forward to seeing a more complete version soon!

    over 1 year ago

  8. Dominik Martin Dominik Martin

    Looks really great. The background really blends. :)

    over 1 year ago

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