BodyGarage

9 Responses

  1. Mark Jooste Mark Jooste

    Hey I'd love some feedback on this! First time I've done this kind of logo mark with mostly type. Any suggestions?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Joe Nicklo Joe Nicklo

    "the" would be nice a little larger

    the two lines are a bit thin, especially in comparison to the big, bold "BODY" type.

    Finally, the Dumbbell is a tad small.

    Overall it's got nice potential but I think there are some balance issues.

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Mark Jooste Mark Jooste

    Thanks @Joe Nicklo. I know there are issues but I just couldn't place it. When you look at something too long its good to have fresh eyes on it. Thanks for you feedback Joe, I appreciate it.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Joe Nicklo Joe Nicklo

    Any time! Just return the favor :)

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    over 1 year ago

  5. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    Sent you a message - agree with @Joe Nicklo & I think the curvature of "Body" needs to be less. Good start - looking forward to seeing where you take this.

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    over 1 year ago

  6. Cat Noone Cat Noone

    Yeah, I think "Body" would even look good just straight. I'd make the "the" sliggghtly larger. And it looks like the weight is a bit off centered. Is it just my horrible eye sight? If so, I'm sorry.

    Either way, love the choice in font and can't wait to see where you head with this.

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    over 1 year ago

  7. Mark Jooste Mark Jooste

    @Mike Jones Thanks for the feedback and the tweet brotha!
    @Cat Smith Thanks for the feedback. Yea I was struggling with the balance, it is centered however the "Y" has a skinny base compared to the "B" so it looks off balance a bit. I think Straightening the curve more will help.

    Again thanks for all the feedback! I really needed it. :)

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    over 1 year ago

  8. Cat Noone Cat Noone

    Agreed! Looking forward to seeing it.

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    over 1 year ago

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