Fund Logo

Fundlogo

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  1. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    So I was asked to create a Fund logo to raise money for a new school in the Seaside/Alys Beach area. This is what came of it. The building on top is called a buttery, its one of town's recognizable features. Feedback & comments most welcome and appreciated as always. Love to know how to make this better. Hope y'all all have a blessed day!

    over 1 year ago

  2. Alen Type08 Pavlovic Alen Type08 Pavlovic

    Hey big fella! Maybe just 3 little things: a) lose the birds, b) lose that angled line on the side of the cover of the book (top) c) round the entrance arches a bit more, even though they might not be that rounded in real. Just my opinion, of course :)

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Jordan Mahaffey Jordan Mahaffey

    Nice work man, I would play with those arches a bit too. Love the dimensionality to it tho.

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    over 1 year ago

  4. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    @Alen Type08 Pavlovic Thx for the feedback - def can round the arches more - and possibly drop the line to make for a cleaner look - good ideas bro.

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    over 1 year ago

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    over 1 year ago

  6. Eric Stanley Eric Stanley

    This looks great Mike! Love the use of white space, color selection, and what Alen said. Keep up the great work man, always love seeing your designs.

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    over 1 year ago

  7. Flippo+Interactive Flippo+Interactive

    Great Work Buddy

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    over 1 year ago

  8. Jeremiah Wingett Jeremiah Wingett

    Really great man. I could probably go without the birds. I love your use of negative space and colors. Nice work!

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    over 1 year ago

  9. Mike Jones Mike Jones

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    over 1 year ago

  10. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    Looking great Mike. Nice tonal balance / use of the negative space.

    Solid suggestions by @Alen > Tried roughing it out with 2 tones, with a couple minor reductions to see if it would work LINK. Again, definitely a fan of the color / tonal relationship. Just wanted to see how it would play in B/W.

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    over 1 year ago

  11. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    @Michael Spitz digin' your version bro - i think dropping the book paper section is smart, basically simplifying that whole section. Also making the contrast sharper. Thanks for the feedback bro!

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    over 1 year ago

  12. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    So is the left entry throwing anybody off - The building is actually a 4 columns with an open air center....thoughts? See reference - http://30abeachhome.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/IMG_08621.jpg

    over 1 year ago

  13. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    No confusion on this end.

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    over 1 year ago

  14. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    Cool wasn't sure if it was reading correctly or not...lol!

    over 1 year ago

  15. Kevin Burr Kevin Burr

    Agree with @Alen Type08 Pavlovic . Otherwise, really nice!

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    over 1 year ago

  16. Roberto Ortiz Roberto Ortiz

    Digging this. Nice job Mike.

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    over 1 year ago

  17. Matt Redway Matt Redway

    Nice work Mike! Feels so serene!

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    over 1 year ago

  18. Gary Chew Gary Chew

    great work as usual! you rocks!

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    over 1 year ago

  19. Marco Wilbrink Marco Wilbrink

    Agree with all the above, the simplified version of Michael is very helpful (personally I would always create first in B&W, it helps you focus). I like the discussions how to improve. Mike love what you did, curious now about the final :-)

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    over 1 year ago

  20. Andrea Cau Andrea Cau

    Really nice logo. I would remove only the birds.

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    over 1 year ago

  21. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    @Marco Wilbrink agreed on designing in B&W - did that in fact, But def need to go back and tweak some more. His version we dope and helpful fo sho. Thx for the feedback bro!

    @Andrea Cau I gotta ask what is it with the birds that has everyone wanting them dropped so I dont make that mistake in future revisions etc? Curious if its just not needed, distracting or what? thoughts? thx for the feedback too!

    @Gary Chew @Matt Redway @Kevin Burr @Roberto Ortiz Many thx y'all!! 'Preciate it!

    over 1 year ago

  22. Marco Wilbrink Marco Wilbrink

    Personally I think the birds distract, your eyes are first drawn to the building than to the left to the birds, leaving them out your eyes rest only on the building. As it is intended as a logo remember when you downsize it, the birds will disappear anyway; less is more, daring to leave things out is an art to conquer. The quote of Antoine De Saint-Exupery (1900 - 1944) summarizes it best: "A designer knows he has achieved perfection not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away". Keep up the good work!

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    over 1 year ago

  23. Mike Jones Mike Jones

    @Marco Wilbrink Great feedback exactly what I wanted to know - & what a rad quote!! Many thx bro!!

    over 1 year ago

  24. Marco Wilbrink Marco Wilbrink

    Pleasure Mike, I am happy to receive any feedback as well! ;-)

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    over 1 year ago

  25. Andrea Cau Andrea Cau

    @Mike I think that the logo can live without the birds too. In this case the birds are too much small so it better if you remove them by the work.

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    over 1 year ago

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