Lion & Anvil 1st Draft

Firstdraft

So its been a while - staying stupid busy with work, kids, and freelance! Hope everybody has been doing well & is being blessed!

With that said could use some solid feedback on this rough draft. So many kinks to get out but looking for thoughts & comments from my peers on how to make this the best it can be. Anyway many thanks in advance for anything you might share. Cant wait to put the feedback to this piece. And the ribbon is just for placement right now - I have not even started to work on it yet. Also nibs or no nibs on the smaller letters?Early stages people - let me have it!! Word.

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