Screen shot 2012 10 14 at 11.19.55 pm

I added a few elements to the top and bottom to help link the circles. Also, I removed the "th" and changed "september" to "sept to help with the hierarchy issues on top. I'm not sure if it's quite there yet, but I like the way it's developing. The wing shapes on the bottom circles look kind of awkward.
I'll come back with another rebound in the next few days. If there's anything else you guys see that looks odd, just let me know. I want to make this thing so killer that Luke will want it tattooed on his back one day.

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