What Does Sick Look Like (WIP)

What does sick look like title dribbble v2

This is a WIP of a title for an infographic about living with a disease calls POTS.

I am branching out into a new style for me, so feedback is very much appreciated.

Larger size: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/43809501/what-does-sick-look-like-title.jpg

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