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  1. Beggars & Thieves Beggars & Thieves

    My last design woulda costed me a gazillion dollars, so I had to regroup. I'm struggling a bit with the U in "Yous" it keeps reading as either yours or yows. Any feedback welcome.

    over 1 year ago

  2. John Kane John Kane

    Love the Y/G. Think you may benefit from moving that lowercase r-like downstroke that follows the o to after the u though...

    Update: actually, maybe its the break at the bottom of the u thats making it hard for me to see. You try it without any line breaks in the individual letters, just between them?

    over 1 year ago

  3. Beggars & Thieves Beggars & Thieves

    @John Kane Smith yeah I think it is the break in the U that is created the gestalt effect. maybe it allowing that line to arc up and then adding the S as a broken letter.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Just received a pic of my finished neon piece for the Locals Only Neon show.

    over 1 year ago

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