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by Annelies Gailliaert Pro

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  1. Annelies Gailliaert Annelies Gailliaert

    The owners asked me to incorporate the existing shields into the logo (picture :
    Who has some feedback for me?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Dan Romero Dan Romero

    Good color scheme! :)

    over 1 year ago

  3. Johan Ronsse Johan Ronsse

    Here's some feedback, not holding back ;)

    Now you have a frame-in-frame logo, it doesn't really work for me.

    One idea could be to get rid of the outer comment balloon type frame, straighten up the shields, make them bigger so they're not hanging but standing on the ground.

    I.e. one idea could be that one shield rests on another at a 30 degree angle, creating a sort of 3D effect

    In terms of the type you should try to kern manually or get a better serif, the font you're using looks off in places.

    I don't know why there should be an interpunct between vakantiehuis and beernem.

    It might be an idea to use caps with letter spacing for the small text (vakantiehuis beernem) so legibility is ensured at small sizes

    It also would get rid of the problem that you are writing a locality (Beernem) with a lowercase letter.


    over 1 year ago

  4. Annelies Gailliaert Annelies Gailliaert

    @Johan Ronsse Hey thanks! Will try out that feedback :-)

    over 1 year ago

  5. Ruben Stragier Ruben Stragier

    Hey Annelies, ik denk dat je goed op weg bent. Naar mijn mening, nog enkele puntjes:
    - 'GOED van ... beernem' > is een mondje vol (dit geheel zou ik ook een stuk kleiner zetten tov het schild)
    - Nu heb je twee elementen 'schild' en er naast ''GOED van ... beernem' > zou meer één geheel moeten worden > mss es proberen te centreren: Schildje bovenaan, eronder 'Goed van den Bogaerde' ((dit alles in dezelfde kapitaalgrootte), daaronder 'vakantiehuis beernem' (idd, het 'puntje' tussen beide woorden vind ik ook overbodig, lees veel vlotter zonder).



    over 1 year ago

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