Charitable Filmaking : Mark Update 2

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  1. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    Wanted to post one alternative that I've been working on for this guy.

    The shadows from the last 'unbroken' version were really more of an afterthought, adapted from this breakdown for a solid black and white version.

    Yesterday I was pretty sure that I prefered the 'unbroken' version as a primary...but for practical purposes / flexability, today I'm thinking this guy might be stronger choice?

    Again, not 100% set on anything just yet (color's still flexible, etc.) but I mainly want to nail down the form factor.

    Let me know what you guys think...

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    almost 2 years ago

  2. Alen Type08 Pavlovic Alen Type08 Pavlovic

    I like this one much more!

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    almost 2 years ago

  3. Diane Faye Zerr Diane Faye Zerr

    I like the previous version more, it has more of an impact than this one.

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    almost 2 years ago

  4. Josh Schott Josh Schott

    The blocks in the film strip and the breaks around them compete too much in this one for me. The unbroken version just seems perfect and fluid.

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    almost 2 years ago

  5. Alex Parker ⇢ ☁ Alex Parker ⇢ ☁

    I like the broken look too, but if you do the broken look, this feels a little dominated by the left side. If the orange film was "in-front" where they join at the top, i wonder how that would look?

    anyway, they all look good!

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    almost 2 years ago

  6. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    @Alen - Cheers bud! Tend to agree with everyone that said the shadows were unecessary... When you can get away with a single form factor across all media, in my opinion that's usually preferable.

    @Diane & @Josh - Thanks a lot for the thoughts guys. That's pretty much how I felt yesterday...but try sitting with it a bit, and get back to me ;)

    @Alex - Tried the flip and prefered this one, but again, still tweaking... Decided to go with a straight 50/50 split vs. the alternating colors for this version in an attempt to clarify things a bit given the breaks. The B/W works particularly well like this, so I think it'll come down to color balance.

    almost 2 years ago

  7. Alen Type08 Pavlovic Alen Type08 Pavlovic

    Agreed, and just to add, films/movies are all about dimension, space, volume and I feel all that more in this version. As you said, it will be interesting to see some other color schemes as well but done like this window of opportunity for those combinations is widely opened.

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    almost 2 years ago

  8. Inka Mathew Inka Mathew

    I vote for this one. Very clean and I still get the depth feel also.

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    almost 2 years ago

  9. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    @Alen - Totally agree. Defefitnyl still have to do a bit of color exploration, but I had to get that B/W version nailed down...and of course as a general rule, that's usually where we should be working from to begin with.

    @Inka - Thanks for the vote!

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    almost 2 years ago

  10. Alex Roka Alex Roka

    Agreed, this one is definitely safer and will be easier to read at any size. Great work on this!

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    almost 2 years ago

  11. Luke Ritchie Luke Ritchie

    Simpler.Better,faster

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    almost 2 years ago

  12. Michael Spitz Michael Spitz

    @Alex & @Luke - Right on guys!

    almost 2 years ago

  13. Andrea Cau Andrea Cau

    Now is much better.

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    almost 2 years ago

  14. Philip Clark Philip Clark

    This one would be easier to replicate at small sizes, I imagine. Might lose the shadows w/ the first one.

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    almost 2 years ago

  15. Riley Cran Riley Cran

    I'm voting for this one, Michael.

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    almost 2 years ago

  16. Lucian Mangu Lucian Mangu

    The other one looks better, but please fix the shadows... :)

    almost 2 years ago

  17. Tom Johnson Tom Johnson

    This is much better. From a production standpoint, the other one would never fly in many applications.

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    almost 2 years ago

  18. Ivy Fuld Ivy Fuld

    I like the simplicity and clean lines of this, and it reads right away to me. I just think they vintagey brown and orange color palette doesn't quite work. I'd love to see some color alternatives!

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    almost 2 years ago

  19. Duc Le Duc Le

    I like this one better. good work!

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    almost 2 years ago

  20. Scotty Reifsnyder Scotty Reifsnyder

    Really smart!

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    almost 2 years ago

  21. Brandon Harrison Brandon Harrison

    This is definitely my fav!

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    almost 2 years ago

  22. Dario Calonaci Dario Calonaci

    This one is perfect!

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    almost 2 years ago

  23. ▲Claudiu Ungureanu ▲Claudiu Ungureanu

    i am with Riley. my vote too.

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    almost 2 years ago

  24. Adam Mann Adam Mann

    Huge improvement, this is great.

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    over 1 year ago

  25. Jose Luquin Jose Luquin

    Lovely design, I like it

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    over 1 year ago

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