And here goes round 2! Changed the typeface to a humanist sans per suggestions from @Jeff and @Claire, fixed the stroke per @Neil's suggestion, and per @Jillian's great feedback I tracked out the type, simplified the ornamentation, and added weight to the serif characters, etc. How does this work?
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