Why

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  1. Adam Grason Adam Grason

    Working on some type. Trying to get a grid for where I want to take the piece. Pretty happy with the overall feel of this one. Thoughts?

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Richie Stewart Richie Stewart

    I would suggest that the thick stem of the 'h' share the same diagonal as the thin stem on the 'w'.

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    almost 2 years ago

  3. Adam Grason Adam Grason

    @Richie Stewart Just noticed that...thanks for the feedback!

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    almost 2 years ago

  4. Nick Slater Nick Slater

    Sooo rad!!

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    almost 2 years ago

  5. Luke Ritchie Luke Ritchie

    My humble suggestion/thought would be - if your wanting to go with something hand drawn then go all out, make it rough and inconsistant. if not try to organise your lettering around some kind of structure.. consistent angles (like Richie's suggestion)..something like that. if this makes any sense. Just my thinking.

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    almost 2 years ago

  6. Adam Grason Adam Grason

    @Luke Ritchie Dude thank you so much. I have been wrestling between the two. I really appreciate your feedback man!

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    almost 2 years ago

  7. Nikita Prokhorov Nikita Prokhorov

    Why...what? Why is this so good?

    @Adam Grason, I really dig this. My only thought would be that the curves on those tiny little terminations look a bit off. Maybe the curves needs to be smoother and reflect some of the larger curves, maybe they need to be consistently inconsistent (wait...what?), but I think that's the only comment I'd make. Maybe smooth out a few of the curves as well, just to make for smoother lines and transitions from letter to decorative element (as for example, in the left part of the W.) I would also either angle the 'h' to match the W (as @Richie Stewart mentioned) or make the 'h' upright so that all the letters are the same weight.

    Looks great so far!!

    Now all you have left is What, When, Where, Who and How. I expect them to be done within the hour. ;)

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    almost 2 years ago

  8. Adam Grason Adam Grason

    @Nikita Prokhorov BAHAHA Awesome feedback and I will not miss your deadline :)

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    almost 2 years ago

  9. lisa romero lisa romero

    love it but the space btwn the h and the y bothers me. think the h leg is a bit short? other than that, beautiful work.

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    almost 2 years ago

  10. stella stella

    This is amazing Adam!

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    almost 2 years ago

  11. Ryan Deo Ryan Deo

    great work, yet again. The corner of the flourish of the "w" seems a bit harsh compared to the flow of the rest. it may be the leg of the "h" that needs to go thin, carried over from the bowl to maintain consistency between the letter forms. The ascender may be it, but I feel like it's the leg.

    Maybe also have the tail of the "y" become the flourish rather than adding it to the terminal. Just my 2 cents.

    almost 2 years ago

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