24 Responses

  1. Shannon Hatch Shannon Hatch

    Continued logo exploration, what one you guys think has more potential to keep going? Thanks!!

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Nikita Prokhorov Nikita Prokhorov

    Top left - a bit hard to read, and I see the 'I' in the negative space. I know what you're going for with this one, but I don't think it's working at all.

    Top right - http://www.bigsmack.tv/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/chevy01.jpg

    Bottom left - hard to read.

    Bottom right - works well, and definitely more legible than the others.

    But, I really like what you tried to do in the first one with the negative space. Maybe it's worth exploring again, maybe using a shape of a brick, maybe using other negative spaces within the letterforms, etc?

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    almost 2 years ago

  3. Shannon Hatch Shannon Hatch

    @Nikita Prokhorov Hey thanks for all that! Helps a lot :)

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Patricio Herrera Patricio Herrera

    I like the first one!

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    almost 2 years ago

  5. Alex Kurchin Hattomonkey Alex Kurchin Hattomonkey

    Bottom right!

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    almost 2 years ago

  6. Andrés Rodríguez Andrés Rodríguez

    Bottom left type, maybe you could take the icon down with the type or try with the original icon. Love the colors!

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    almost 2 years ago

  7. Ray Martin Ray Martin

    The type on the bottom left plus a simple icon instead of what you have now = win

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    almost 2 years ago

  8. Mattox Shuler Mattox Shuler

    I'm digging the bottom right...

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    almost 2 years ago

  9. Andrew Colin Beck Andrew Colin Beck

    top right (winner)
    bottom right (runner up)

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    almost 2 years ago

  10. Oleg Glauzer Oleg Glauzer

    Bottom right, is better, i guess.

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    almost 2 years ago

  11. Jorge Calvo Jorge Calvo

    yeeah! bottom right rules.

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    almost 2 years ago

  12. Elena Meneghini Elena Meneghini

    bottom right is poweful

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    almost 2 years ago

  13. Kyle O'Hara Kyle O'Hara

    I think the bottom right has the most potential. Also, looks like you could explore a more extended brand off of that option too.

    almost 2 years ago

  14. Kyle O'Hara Kyle O'Hara

    Maybe add arms to the "I" to provide a stronger balance.

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    almost 2 years ago

  15. Giallo Giallo

    The bottom right seems the best because is very different from the others, but the one in the top right is very clean, istitutional and the concept of brick is clearer

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    almost 2 years ago

  16. Brendan Pittman Brendan Pittman

    I'm digging the bottom right so far. I think top left has potential to be really nice, but the negative space needs some tweaking. Good work!

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    almost 2 years ago

  17. Stephanie Schlim Stephanie Schlim

    i like the top right but i'm afraid it's already been done before. bottom right is great, and the vertical "RBC" works nicely as well. maybe try to align the period with the I a little more, looks awesome!!

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    almost 2 years ago

  18. Shannon Hatch Shannon Hatch

    Thank you everyone for this feedback! Helps a lot, you're all using dribbble the right way :)

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    almost 2 years ago

  19. Colin Campbell Colin Campbell

    The bottom right is definitely the strongest in my opinion, the "I" may need to scoot over a little. It's also my favorite. Great stuff here.

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    almost 2 years ago

  20. Kathryn Colohan Kathryn Colohan

    Bottom right is the strongest. Really nice exploration.

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    almost 2 years ago

  21. Sem Tolentino Sem Tolentino

    bottom right grabbed my attention straightaway

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    almost 2 years ago

  22. Yuriy Oparenko Yuriy Oparenko

    Bottom right is great!

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    almost 2 years ago

  23. Skyler Westby Skyler Westby

    I love the idea of the bottom right. Perhaps, for an icon, you could make a solid red brick with an 'R' cut-out or pressed into it. and then type out the whole word 'redbrick' beside or below. Great work, textures, balance, font & direction.

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    almost 2 years ago

  24. This was a total different spin on things. Still concept, project has probably turned into 'do whenever you have free time' kinda deal.

    Unsure if it speaks building under construction or not.

    over 1 year ago

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