Haiku about haikus


4 Responses

  1. Nick Walsh Nick Walsh

    A very early look at a possible homepage layout, with careful attention to syllable counts.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Olivier Lacan Olivier Lacan

    At the risk of sounding harsh, I think Haikus often have awful rythm — at least in English. Here I simply found myself disoriented by the scansion and the syntax.

    almost 2 years ago

  3. Nick Walsh Nick Walsh

    A fair concern - and scansion is a nifty word - but I think it'll flow appropriately at full size. I'll show you the current progress if you have a minute this morning.

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Olivier Lacan Olivier Lacan

    Crap, I missed that. Guess I'll ask for peek next time. It's true that the flow of the page may change the deal quite a bit. Had to look up scansion because it's a more common word in French but looks like it a $10 one in English. Should have gone with rhythm but I wasn't sure that would make my point. :-)

    almost 2 years ago

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