EP - "P" Serif


13 Responses

  1. Erin Potter Erin Potter

    So @Henric Sjösten made a comment about nudging the serif in on the "P." I just wanted to get some opinions. Reference my previous shot for a comparison.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Chris Beaumont Chris Beaumont

    Looks a lot more balanced than the previous one, good move


    almost 2 years ago

  3. Jake Mize Jake Mize

    Yeah, I was going to drop a note on the other about shortening the serif on the P. Looks good Erin!


    almost 2 years ago

  4. Erin Potter Erin Potter

    Thanks fellas.

    almost 2 years ago

  5. Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Great ;)
    I think you could even go as far as aligning it with the right side of the stem of the E, ifyaknowwhaddamsayin?

    almost 2 years ago

  6. Erin Potter Erin Potter

    @Henric Sjösten You know I did that but decided to split the difference because this looked a smidge more balanced to me.

    Your wisdom has been beneficial none-the-less. :)

    almost 2 years ago

  7. Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    I dont like editing guys work out of respect, but since you seem to be cool with my input, I did a thing to show what I'm thinking :)

    Not only making the P look more like a P, I also like how it adds to the diagonal balance that is made by the positioning of the letters.



    almost 2 years ago

  8. Erin Potter Erin Potter

    @Henric Sjösten I'm a sponge. I'll listen to what others have to say. It would be different if you were not being constructive.

    I love all advice/input I can get

    almost 2 years ago

  9. Henric Sjösten Henric Sjösten

    Cool! :)

    In that case, have you tried making the vertical lines just a little bit thicker? They tend to look a bit thinner then the horizontal lines.

    almost 2 years ago

  10. Claire Coullon Claire Coullon

    I really like this Erin, the composition feels so compact and distinctive. Absolutely love how the 'P' bowl 'points' back into the middle of the 'E', creates a nice sense of movement. I agree with @Henric on the weight of the verticals, just to compensate for the natural optical illusion.


    almost 2 years ago

  11. Sean Glass Sean Glass

    That is great. You could put it on a hat.

    over 1 year ago

  12. Adam Johnson Adam Johnson

    Love this mark!!

    about 1 year ago

  13. Caleb Wayne Jensen Caleb Wayne Jensen

    I love this!

    2 months ago

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