Honey (Draft)

4 Responses

  1. Allen Walker Allen Walker

    Another 1st round comp.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Justin Juno Justin Juno

    I really like the graphic, although I feel the bee could be larger. You could also try adding possible bee elements/traits like stripes to the gold pot in later drafts.


    almost 2 years ago

  3. Allen Walker Allen Walker

    Good feedback.. I tried to be subtle with the actual BEE because it wasn't part of the clients briefing... But striping to bottom end of the jar could be really cool for an updated draft. Thanks @Justin Juno

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Jake Holzman Jake Holzman

    All I'd do is raise the bee slightly and tilt it a little. It looks kind of like an arrow the way it is idk... Great work though!

    over 1 year ago

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