Tied Up with String

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7 Responses

  1. James Veluya James Veluya

    Brown paper package

    over 3 years ago

  2. Iconfinder Iconfinder

    Nice box and details!

    Some feedback on the work:

    I think you need to work on the lights and shadow. The three visible surfaces are too similar in lighting. E.g. make the top lighter and the right surface darker. Also the shadows looks a bit odd - it seems like the box is hovering over the surface it's placed on.

    Other than that, I love it!

    over 3 years ago

  3. James Veluya James Veluya

    Ah, you're right! I'll update accordingly.

    over 3 years ago

  4. James Gill James Gill

    This is lovely work.

    If you think about the light source, and the impact that would have on the object and its surroundings then it should help resolve the issues Martin noted.

    Still - great stuff!

    over 3 years ago

  5. Milos Sutanovac Milos Sutanovac

    Sweet debut - welcome!

    over 3 years ago

  6. Rick Murphy Rick Murphy

    Nice icon! Agree with Martin about the shading but it's so close to greatness.

    Welcome to Dribbble!

    over 3 years ago

  7. Micah Davis Micah Davis

    Nice work James! I like the shading...especially on the tag.

    over 3 years ago

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