theme park nerd - logo refinements

5 Responses

  1. Mark McCorkell Mark McCorkell

    I have been working on refining the type spacing a little and I think it's looking much better now. :-)

    over 3 years ago

  2. Pete Lacey Pete Lacey

    YES!

    over 3 years ago

  3. Graham Smith Graham Smith

    Looking great. I feel some thickening up of the circus tent lines etc is in order, just feels it needs to be a bit more 'fuller'.

    Also the tag line I think needs to be sized up, possibly with a condensed font or split onto two lines, but I feel at the mo it's a tad too small. If the logo is shrunk down to letterhead or business card size, you'll not be able to read it.

    But only tweaks really. Well done that man.

    over 3 years ago

  4. I made a few more improvements to the hat/tent/canopy part of the logomark which gave the it more symmetry, which it was lacking before. The tagline still isn't finalised yet because the guys are still thinking about which tagline to use.

    over 3 years ago

  5. Mark McCorkell Mark McCorkell

    @Graham – thanks for the feedback! I just rebounded some more little refinements there now. The sooner I know which tagline they want to go for I'll know better how to typeset the tagline. :-)

    over 3 years ago

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