Event Ticket

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18 Responses

  1. Ryan Putnam Ryan Putnam

    Working on an icon.

    over 3 years ago

  2. Sacha Greif Sacha Greif

    I really like it! My only criticism would be that the embossed/cutout effect doesn't seem like it belongs on an actual paper ticket.

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    over 3 years ago

  3. Ryan Putnam Ryan Putnam

    Thanks for the feedback! I was wondering about that myself. I did it to go with the other icons in the set, but I might have to revisit.

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    over 3 years ago

  4. Aurélien Foutoyet Aurélien Foutoyet

    really sweet shot !

    over 3 years ago

  5. Umar Irshad Umar Irshad

    wow nicely done ^^

    over 3 years ago

  6. Sacha Greif Sacha Greif

    How about going more for a "vintage print" kind of effect? On the other hand, realism is not always necessary. I doubt people outside of Dribbble would even notice that :)

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    over 3 years ago

  7. Robbie Pearce Robbie Pearce

    I never seen a glossy ticket.

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    over 3 years ago

  8. Viktor Engborg Viktor Engborg

    I agree with the others. A beautiful piece of graphic, but tickets aren't glossy, nor embossed.

    over 3 years ago

  9. Sacha Greif Sacha Greif

    @Robbie, you forgot about the golden ticket!

    over 3 years ago

  10. Erica Schoonmaker Erica Schoonmaker

    Seems kinda shiny for something that's usually made out of matte paper, usually recycled cardboard. And, yeah, I agree with Sacha about the embossing looking weird.

    The golden ticket was made out of metallic paper, by the way. This one doesn't look like it's metallic paper, and the color is reminiscent of actual tickets I've seen at carnivals.

    over 3 years ago

  11. Elliott Rounsavall Elliott Rounsavall

    similar ticket, similar feedback here.

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    over 3 years ago

  12. Aaron Martin Aaron Martin

    I did a similar ticket as well here.

    over 3 years ago

  13. Ryan Putnam Ryan Putnam

    Thanks everyone for the feedback! I'm definitely going to check out a more vintage papper feel for the icon.

    over 3 years ago

  14. Julien Renvoye Julien Renvoye

    Very nice Ryan ! I think it looks amazing !

    over 3 years ago

  15. Tyce Clee Tyce Clee

    Great work Ryan, I definitely agree though with @Sacha and others with maybe removing the shine and emboss on the font to achieve a more 'real' and vintage looking ticket.

    over 3 years ago

  16. gustomela ☁ gustomela ☁

    Who said it has to look like the real thing to be beautiful?
    I think this is really nice!
    I especially like the Susa font for "ticket.

    over 3 years ago

  17. Martin Sorensen Martin Sorensen

    Not too happy with this one. The gloss just doesn't look good on the ticket, and I really don't think that the black and white go well together.

    over 3 years ago

  18. Dan Schonhaar Dan Schonhaar

    This is pretty nice, mate. A couple of criticisms though.

    1. The glass effect. It just doesn't look right on a 'paper' ticket. A subtle gradient to suggest a light source would work much better.

    2. The ticket number at each end is too dark and bold. Ease back the opacity 20% or so to allow the texture to come through and you'll be much happier with the result.

    3. The white text looks great but the black looks a bit odd as there seems to be a slight glow suggested at the bottom of the letters.

    Have a butchers at one I created a little while back. It's not perfect but it demonstrates a couple of the points I'm trying to make.

    over 3 years ago

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