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I am working on this redesign for a venture firm who have a cool set of other features for start-ups (money and services pretty awesome! :)).

I want to do more with the YOU dot. I feel like I got the focus right but IT is not right. I want an app developer to relate to it in that they say that's me. Also at the same time I need to illustrate iphone and android. I don't want to over design or illustrate it but I am a bit stuck - I worry when I want to add more usually in my case that is a bad sign.

Then ignoring what the text says it's all wrong, what do you think of the spacing and size? Breathing enough? The let us help you part should be the last visible part of the fold - and I need to work on that part a bit I just put that in as a place holder.

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