F&W Festival – Work in progress

F w festival wip

Hello, everybody! It's great to be here. Everyone seems to be doing amazing work.

First of all, thank you Florin Capota ( http://dribbble.com/florin-capota ) for the invitation!

This is a lettering project that I'm currently working on. The finished logo will read "The 36th Food&Wine Festival in Aurora". I'll do the tweaks after I'll have the lettering for the whole piece. For now, the diagonals on the V and A in "Festival" seem too thin. "Wine", as it wraps around a circle on the bottom, seems bigger than "Food". The second O in "Food" needs some Bezier TLC. The top serif of the S in "Festival" is too tiny. D seems bigger than O.

Any comments are welcomed.

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