Lettering quote rough

It’s been a while since I’ve actually posted work in progress, so I thought I’d post this lettering piece I’m in the very early stages for. Attached is a picture of some of the really rough scribbles which I then used to draw out the first full draft: top left. Top right is the same image, but roughly edited on photoshop to fix spacing, angles, positioning, proportions, etc. The difference bad spacing makes..!