I am extremely happy with the way this has turned out. With a lot of time on the light table and a few minor tweaks here and there, I think its finally there. Thanks to everyone for the great feedback as I greatly appreciate it.
If you're wondering about the star its something I noticed I use in every sketchbook, I checked a lot of them, and it is just a little reminder to myself to recognize the pieces or type treatments I like the most. Big thanks to @KevinGormal as he spotted this originally and I wouldn't have seen it as I use them all the time. Thanks bro!
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