Type2

15 Responses

  1. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    I need some help from all you type & shape geniuses. What do you think? Any parts look awkward to you?

    about 2 years ago

  2. Matthew Skiles Matthew Skiles

    I like everything, except for the top of the "o". I'm not sure about the dent in it.

    about 2 years ago

  3. Jonathan Quintin Jonathan Quintin

    Maybe 'something' with the f, just not sure what.

    about 2 years ago

  4. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    Thanks @Matthew Skiles . I thought I would hint at the connector thing but it might look slicker without the dent. I'll give it a go.

    Thanks @Jonathan Quintin . I may just have been staring at this much too long but I'm not really quite happy with the bottom loop of the "f" and can't seem to get it right.... I think that's the 'something' on the f...

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    about 2 years ago

  5. Jonathan Quintin Jonathan Quintin

    Perhaps 'slightly' too thick at the bottom?

    about 2 years ago

  6. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    @Jonathan Quintin Yeah, maybe that's it! I'll put it to rest and have another look in a couple of hours/days and see.

    about 2 years ago

  7. Jonathan Quintin Jonathan Quintin

    Fresh eyes in the morning ALWAYS works for me:)
    Great work though.

    about 2 years ago

  8. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    Thanks!

    about 2 years ago

  9. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    @James Gill any thoughts?

    about 2 years ago

  10. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    @Jonathan Quintin I found out what it was on the "f". The bottom curve wasn't properly rounded, it has a slight 'dent'. Got rid of it now, I'll post a rebound once I've sorted colouring out.

    about 2 years ago

  11. Benn Mendelsohn Benn Mendelsohn

    first thing i noticed were the two hard edges on the left side of the T, and the bottom of the H. every other character has rounded caps. not sure if that was intentional...

    about 2 years ago

  12. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    @Benn Mendelsohn It was tbh. It somehow looked too soft to me without the sharp edges to pull it back. Do you think it looks weird?

    about 2 years ago

  13. Benn Mendelsohn Benn Mendelsohn

    well maybe just soften the edges a little bit. my eye went straight for those.

    about 2 years ago

  14. Benn Mendelsohn Benn Mendelsohn

    but overall it looks great! good work!

    about 2 years ago

  15. Mathias Vagni Mathias Vagni

    about 2 years ago

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