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  1. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    Still looking for a header font, please check attachment for full view. Any feedback is welcome.

    about 2 years ago

  2. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    Forgot to mention image is a placeholder

    about 2 years ago

  3. Bob Galmarini Bob Galmarini

    @Richard Lowery Jr. seems like a good structure start. Nice and clean and nice background texture. I feel like it could pick up some more detail and attention to the type. Maybe a bit more lineheight on the paragraph. I think I would like to see some subtle details and icon work. I could see each of your 3 columns having nice icons to represent the titles. Like I said, it is a good start, but I think it can be pushed a bit more. The challenge will be to not over design it and keep the clean feel you have.

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    about 2 years ago

  4. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    @Bob Galmarini thanks so much Bob getting on that right now.

    about 2 years ago

  5. Silas Godfrey Silas Godfrey

    I agree with @Bob Galmarini - This is a great start, really cleaning up your type should bring it all together. Maybe a little more hierarchy by changing the paragraphs to a grey and the list items to another grey or cyan. Since you don't have a tone of text I could see you using a sans serif, the serifs make those paragraphs a little harsh without some serious kerning. Again great start, and I'm a big fan of that logo and your super clean layout.

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    about 2 years ago

  6. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    @Silas Godfrey thanks. We are working hard on cleaning it up and establishing a typographical oneness and exploring some different icon options. More coming soon.

    about 2 years ago

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