A Is For Ampersand v4


4 Responses

  1. Ryan Lascano Ryan Lascano

    Slow progress is better than no progress. Still trying to get the lockup to read right, reduced to relatively simple shapes for the time being.

    about 2 years ago

  2. Sarah Zimmerman Sarah Zimmerman

    I think "A is for" feels a bit crowded in that circle. And the ampersand inside the word ampersand seems to read like a capital E, so it looks like Ampersend. Also, what is the purpose of the diamond inside the D?

    I like the color palette of this version, it's nice to see the orange brought in. However, compositionally I think this one flows better: http://dribbble.com/shots/314387-A-Is-For-Ampersand-Redux-v3


    about 2 years ago

  3. Loren Morris Loren Morris

    The orange-brown banner is nice. I do agree with @Sarah Gridley on the ampersend thing.

    The simpler the better in my opinion. Look forward to seeing the final version.

    about 2 years ago

  4. Rusty C. Cook Rusty C. Cook

    I agree with Sarah on crowded "A is for" and the ampersand in the word. Perhaps you can replace the E with it instead of the A?

    about 2 years ago

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