Book Cover Sneak

Cs sneak

I was asked to design a book cover for a friend that is getting published. The first draft of the cover went out today, so i know I will be getting revisions back, This is a sample of the hand lettered title of the book. I would love some feedback. Not totally sold on the "m's" and "n's" top bars? Or the hard edge of the shadow? thoughts?? Thanks in advance!

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