Michel van der Spuij

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Feedback wanted cake cry girl

Hi guys, i'm working on this logo and I could really use some feedback. I started with the left one and I liked the energy and greediness she expresses. But after looking at it for a while I started to doubt if she is maybe to detailed for a logo. That's why I tried the right approach. It is more simplistic but also to decent. I want her to cry but also look happy and a bit greedy. Any thoughts on which approach works best and how I can improve what i'm trying to achieve?

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