Mlask_draft01

Hi folks.

This is a logo I'm working on for an online magazine. I'm looking for your feedback and words of wisdom, please be honest and don't be shy :)

To be specific I'm looking for info about:
- letter spacing,
- letters shape and connections
- white space and proportions

Word i'm trying to present is MLASK (in polish it describes a sound that you make when something is very tasty, delicious)

Thanks in advance! ^_^