This is pretty rad, but I think the first stroke of the M should be thin like the third stroke. It would help take the bulkiness out of that letter.
over 2 years ago
You're right Greg, that would've been a better choice I agree.
PS. What pen are you using? :)
You're getting good, dude! Seriously good stuff!
@Jake Used the 005 and 01 for this one.
@Eric Hey thanks a bunch!
Awesome. Every time I come back to your page, your work gets better and better with every shot. Your typography has got a really original, vibrant style + feel and it comes across in all the drawings and designs you do. Nice work again!
Great work, agree with Greg as well, the "M" needs some work.
may i suggest just fixing the kerning beetween "IM" "LI" "FY" :) great work just that seems not flowing for me.
@Juan, yep, if this were more than a quick sketch done in pen, I would definitely make a lot of adjustments. :)
Despite some odd kerning, it's very nice Sean~!
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