Function Central marque #3


5 Responses

  1. Robbie Manson Robbie Manson

    This is supposed to be an amalgamation of the two initial marque variations I showed the client, but I'm not completely sure it's *there* yet.

    Do you guys have any thoughts/suggestions?

    over 4 years ago

  2. Joshua Blankenship Joshua Blankenship

    This is looking good.

    The "C" feels a tad too stiff. I'd love to see the bowl of the C less tall and more round. I think it would fill the negative space in between the letters better, and still give you that great curve on the left bottom.

    over 4 years ago

  3. Robbie Manson Robbie Manson

    Great suggestion Joshua, thanks. On it...

    over 4 years ago

  4. Sebastiaan de With Sebastiaan de With

    Agree with Joshua. Other than that, this looks very nice.

    over 4 years ago

  5. I took Joshua's advice about the shape of the 'C', then added the company name in Type Together's Adelle Extra Bold. The client has since signed it off; the site is now live and I've written a case study on my site.

    about 4 years ago

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