Lightning Bolt Rebound

4 Responses

  1. Bill Biwer Bill Biwer

    Love the shape of this. The lightning bolt seems a bit too skewed. Maybe try it with more of a vertical bolt? (Check out my rebound)

    almost 4 years ago

  2. Tyler Galpin Tyler Galpin

    @William: This is what I like to see: rebounds for criticism and feedback!

    Funny, I never even half-considered the lightning bolt's orientation. Now you've made the decision much more difficult :) (even though I appreciate it). I'm vibing the uniformity that the vertical bolt gives off.

    almost 4 years ago

  3. Bill Biwer Bill Biwer

    I thought a rebound would be better than trying to explain it in a comment.

    Everything seemed to follow the linear pattern except the lightning bolt in the original. I think the skewed bolt may work if there were another element to compliment it. Perhaps by making the "Industries" type oblique? It may ruin the cleanliness you having going on though...

    almost 4 years ago

  4. Tyler Galpin Tyler Galpin

    I agree that making "industries" oblique/italicized might ruin the flow of the shape etc. I'll probably just make the changes to the lightning bolt as you demonstrated above and rebound when I get home tonight. Cheers, dude!

    almost 4 years ago

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