8 Responses

  1. Juan Arreguin Juan Arreguin

    Follow up from the last shot, this is the actual spelling of the script — next step is Illustrator, kerning, and styling.

    Any suggestions?

    close-up: http://cl.ly/6aQW

    almost 3 years ago

  2. Jimmy Wilson Jimmy Wilson

    Looking great, only suggestions would be to thicken up the stem and descender of the y, so it matches the a and h and adjust the curve of the tail on the h so it matches the harder angles of the a's and y.

    almost 3 years ago

  3. Juan Arreguin Juan Arreguin

    Noted: Thanks Jimmy, i'll work on those... It was a quick sketch at least to see the whole name put together, I'll def now be getting into the details for the type. ;)

    almost 3 years ago

  4. Marco Sierra Marco Sierra

    Nice work

    almost 3 years ago

  5. Juan Arreguin Juan Arreguin

    Thanks @Marco!

    almost 3 years ago

  6. Juan Gomez Juan Gomez

    you're doing some good work, but i feel the uppercase A looks like an H at first and the angle doesn't help in the flow, it looks like two different typefaces; also the y is more alike the uppercase A and the final h seems interesting but can be confused with an "l" + another element.

    almost 3 years ago

  7. Juan Arreguin Juan Arreguin

    Tocayo, thanks for the the feedback, I will correct those, I ended up suspending this project for a bit.. but once I get back into it, I will make those corrections, and fix the things that you pointed out.

    Thanks!

    almost 3 years ago

  8. Juan Gomez Juan Gomez

    No problem, everything is just suggestions at the end it's your work ;)

    almost 3 years ago

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