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  1. Andrew Brynjulson Andrew Brynjulson

    I don't normally keep posting shots but I've gotten a bunch of feedback that I've been trying out. Here I matched the line thicknesses in the type and the mark.

    The goal from the beginning was to build this triangle shape with nothing but implied lines between 3 elements: type, icon, and negative space. My eye has a lot of fun with it, but it doesn't jive with some people. Love the process. Thanks ya'll.

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    3 months ago

  2. Ben Stafford Ben Stafford

    Nailed it. Increasing thickness was a good move!

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    3 months ago

  3. Jordan Mahaffey Jordan Mahaffey

    I agree with the thicker type. Looks great, I do prefer with no container if I had to choose between that.

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    3 months ago

  4. Dylan Cook Dylan Cook

    Much prefer this and I liked the last one. Very bold.

    Prefer it out of the triangle, feels less constricted.

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    3 months ago

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